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Eh. As far as my comics go, this one is pretty lackluster. This comic was plauged by many problems, but the most major of them was it was stitched together over 2 weeks of sickness/overtime at work.
Some of you may have noticed my uncharacteristic absence as of late, well there ya go! In between a cold, and 12 hour days at work, not much got done around here
As for the comic? I think that it started out great, but I didn't notice much until it was all done, by which point it was put under the knife for a LOT of difficult edits. The writing is a little top-heavy, the paneling is piss-poor, and I am not at all impressed with the poses. Charlotte and Ian are still in their baby-step phases of design, I haven't drawn them hundreds of times like the others, so they are still new and unfamiliar.
Yet, nothing ventured, nothing gained! I was going to scrap the whole comic and start over, but I didn't on the off chance that some people may enjoy it, and also because the sheer amount of time that goes into a comic is pretty heavy, and losing all that would be devestating! It's not THAT bad...I don't think Either way, I won't be requesting critiques, I already spy my own failings and avow to improve them.
Well, enough of my bitching! This comic will join the ranks of the other weaklings (I'm looking at YOU, #2 and #8!) and serve as a reminder of what NOT to do I hope it at least brings a smile to a few viewers, and I promise, I WILL be making it up next comic. This story ark is almost over, huzza!
talk to you all soon, I'm feeling much better and overtime should be done soon!
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Eh. As far as my comics go, this one is pretty lackluster. This comic was plauged by many problems, but the most major of them was it was stitched together over 2 weeks of sickness/overtime at work.
Some of you may have noticed my uncharacteristic absence as of late, well there ya go! In between a cold, and 12 hour days at work, not much got done around here
As for the comic? I think that it started out great, but I didn't notice much until it was all done, by which point it was put under the knife for a LOT of difficult edits. The writing is a little top-heavy, the paneling is piss-poor, and I am not at all impressed with the poses. Charlotte and Ian are still in their baby-step phases of design, I haven't drawn them hundreds of times like the others, so they are still new and unfamiliar.
Yet, nothing ventured, nothing gained! I was going to scrap the whole comic and start over, but I didn't on the off chance that some people may enjoy it, and also because the sheer amount of time that goes into a comic is pretty heavy, and losing all that would be devestating! It's not THAT bad...I don't think Either way, I won't be requesting critiques, I already spy my own failings and avow to improve them.
Well, enough of my bitching! This comic will join the ranks of the other weaklings (I'm looking at YOU, #2 and #8!) and serve as a reminder of what NOT to do I hope it at least brings a smile to a few viewers, and I promise, I WILL be making it up next comic. This story ark is almost over, huzza!
talk to you all soon, I'm feeling much better and overtime should be done soon!
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The cake defines my soul :V